Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday 21 November 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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hi Lily- Rose this is Ocea i like your caritas because it is really good. it was good because you did ¨ what they do ¨ and ¨ who are they ¨ it was very cool that you write about caritas. my Question is your ginipig very cute? i wish i can see your ginipig.
ReplyDeletehi Lily- Rose this is Ocea i like your caritas because it is really good. it was good because you did ¨ what they do ¨ and ¨ who are they ¨ it was very cool that you write about caritas. my Question is your ginipig very cute? i wish i can see your ginipig.
ReplyDeletehalo my name is Sam good job it look nice.
ReplyDeleteHi Lily-rose my name is zeb. I liked how you told what they do and what they are. I think you should work on full stops.
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