WALT: Write a story from another perspective.
Today Mr Gray brought his lambs into school. They are sooo cute. There is one girl and one boy. Their names are Tilly and Timmy. Tilly is the oldest. We had to pretend we were one of the lambs and write a diary entry about coming to school today. Here it is with some photos. Do you like the lambs?
It started off as a normal day.
I was waiting for my owner to come and feed me, like he does every day.
Suddenly big hands grabbed me and put me into a truck.
The drive was probably a few minutes but it felt like forever.
Then I was put in a place with new smells and what felt
like millions of smiling faces staring down at me.
It was embarrassing because I was wearing a nappy!
A nappy That I haven't had to wear in ages!
They think I smell bad but man, it ponged in there.
It was a mixture of stinky feet, farts and smelly shoes!
I almost passed out just trying to breathe!
Finally I was allowed outside!
But even outside smells weird!
It smelled like petrol and coffee and other weird stuff.
Then two girls came and picked me and my friend up
and put us in a sleep area so we could sleep.
I Hope that today turns out good, because it started bad!
Here Is me and my friend!
They call this lady, Lady of the goats.
Here is a photo of two of the boys that walked me.
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