WALT: To write a recount about a event that happened in the holidays.
In Writing we had to write a recount about something that happened in the holidays. It was a really fun activity because we got to write about whatever we want that happened in the holidays. I wrote about when I had a sleepover with Kate. It was easy to do because it was only a few days ago. Here is my writing.
Have you ever had a sleepover before? If you have, who with?
Please comment! {Kind ones please!}
SLEEPOVER WITH KATE!
Have you ever had a sleepover before? I have! My Friend Kate and I had a sleepover at my house during the holidays. It started early and ended late.
When Kate got to my house we went for a walk up the hill with my mum and my little brother. We got to the top and my mum took a photo of the view while Kate and I did the best part of going up the hill . . . running down! We ran down screaming at the top of our lungs and we dodged the sheep poo that was everywhere. We were exhausted when we got to the bottom.
When we got home Kate and I played a made up game called Endangered Species Vets. We would get my soft toys and we would pretend that they were seriously injured. They would stay with us until they were better. Our ‘house’ was a weather beaten hut that my dad made for me and my brother. My favourite patient was when Percy the owl was traumatised from falling out of a tree.
Kate had to leave at 2.30 to go to ballet exams and when she got back my dad took us to the movies to see The War With Grandpa. {GREAT MOVIE]. We got KFC on the way home, it was Kate’s first time having it. We had a shower and talked in bed when we got home. In the morning we had pancakes for breakfast, and we watched Enola Holmes on Netflix. When Kate's Mum picked her up we wrestled on the trampoline and Kate’s jeans split. It was SOOOOOOOOO fun.
It was the best sleepover that I have ever had at my house!! I hope that she can come again.
Hi Lily-Rose, I can't remember my last proper sleepover with friends. I do know I used to love hanging out, reading, playing. Backyard cricket and trampoline rugby were favourites of mine. I like the way you have used punctuation to add impact in your writing. Next time it would be good to add an image to catch your readers eye and encourage more hits. What are other sleepover adventures you've had?
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