Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday 6 May 2020
The Little Shoe Maker Plan
Today in writing we had to plan our character description about The Evil Shoemaker or The Little Shoemaker. I choose the Little Shoemaker. We had to draw a picture of the one we choose. We also had to fill out these boxes. Do you like my drawing?
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Lily-Rose, I really like your drawing. But unfortunately I cannot see any of your writing. Do you think you could try posting it again as I would love to read it.
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