In Writing we had to fix punctuation mistakes in a paragraph. Mr Gray made mistakes on purpose so we could fix them. It was really easy to do. I made the corrections in red so you know what I did. What do you know about punctuation?
It was a freezing cold day. It had been snowing all night in christchurch.Alfred and I went outside to play in the fresh snow. We hadn’t seen this much snow since we went skiing in queenstown last year! Uncle Joe was right when he said that we would wake up this morning and see white. Alfred and I decided to make a snowman in the garden. He started to roll a huge ball for the body, whilst I worked on the head. Then we ran inside and asked mum for a carrot for the nose. We then found pebbles for the eyes and mouth and we called our snowman Nick.
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